Do not tell, show

You'll find this rule in all writing guides: "Show, don't tell." The reason is also clear: it's more true to life. Don't tell me that the soccer player "left in a huff." Rather, say that he "packed his things and left without saying a word." That he was offended I can and should then guess.

Stop describing feelings. Rather describe what happens - the feelings result from it.

Task: replace the following narrated states with "show":

1. He was tired.
2. He was angry.
3. She was happy.